More 11 second club updates

The concept is still along the lines of flirting/advancements un warranted. Ultimately the guy goes in for a kiss, gets rejected, begins tearing up, then scoots out the shot. I wanted to test my idea and poses, and I'm going through now and re-thinking some of the beginning as it goes a bit fast and is unreadable. I also changed the staging a bit.



Background Art Drawing Timelapse as well.

11-second club nov 2013 - boards first pass rough

I still like the idea of the characters flirting, but the composition I was leaning towards crowded the set, and preventing the characters from having space to move. The concept is still along the lines of flirting/advancements un warranted. Ultimately the guy goes in for a kiss, gets rejected, begins tearing up, then scoots out the shot.